Talo Momoe’s “App” Packet – AD

Here is an example that this person allowed me to share for your benefit.  This individual was a 17OT03 Active Duty (June 2017) select.

Application Info:

• Active Duty Select
• 17OT03

I’ve attached my app profile. Here’s a few positives/negatives that I’ve identified

Positives
Very high AFOQT scores
Very high Academics (Perfect BS GPA/Perfect Tech School Grades)
AF Form 56 Bullets written with very minimal amount of acronyms/shortened words
Organized/Well written LoR
Strong technical background
Wing level additional duties
Industry certification

Negatives
Legal problems
Lack of quarterly/yearly awards
No traditional Air Force professional associations

If anyone notices anything else, please feel free to comment. Also I didn’t upload my personal statement because… well it’s personal. However, I’ve noticed a lot of people take the personal statement as a chance to advertise their accomplishments rather than paint a picture of who they are and what they want. I thought of the personal statement more like a college application essay and talked solely about what drives me to want a commission and why I am so passionate about my goals. If anyone notices any personal stuff in the app that I missed that should maybe be blocked out please let me know.